Feedback: Katie Heider

Aesthetic

  • High contrast between images and background color
  • Consistent aethetic across all compositions
  • The brightness of the colors and images makes the words difficult to read
  • The white words could become more legible against darker background colors
  • The type feels secondary comparared to the dynamic images
  • The characters are pretty large to the top and bottom of the screen
  • Structure

  • Design focuses on the central characters
  • Design is relatively simple and easy to understand
  • The type stands out more in the wider compositions but feels like a background element on the mobile screen
  • Technical Challenges

  • Composition is consistent for both sizes
  • What happens to the text as it moves from the side to the top?
  • Images are well considered and managed